SUBJECT>Re: Free People In A Free Country (edited for grammar)
POSTER>Captain Zot 
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DATE>June 16, 1997 at 19:54:36
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Nice edit, Psiclops, but I would suggest one grammatical change to avoid ending a phrase on a preposition.<p>Yours said:  "based on a vision they all could stand for,"<p>I would suggest it would be more correctly stated:  "based upon a vision for which they could all stand,"<p>Or perhaps you could substitute the word "support" for "stand".<p>FWIW<p>Captain Zot

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