The logo is great (and I mean *really* great) and the menu is very thorough, but if you
were kind of curious about what MarsDawn was, would you know what and where to
click-through? Would you spend the time to do so? Something more is needed to grab a
person's attention and make them want to find out more. Also, there needs to be a "Guide
for Beginners" to keep people from becoming lost or confused - something sure to drive
them away.
I have taken an extreme liberty. To help illustrate my idea, I downloaded the front page
and modified it. I also have started another page to serve as the Beginner's Guide. I
placed them on one of my sites - unlinked to anything but each other - for your perusal.
They can be found at:
http://www.geocities.com/CapeCanaveral/1393/index2.htm
and
http://www.geocities.com/CapeCanaveral/1393/index3.htm
Once again, just a suggestion, but one I think may help bring in those passing through.
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